Friday, March 6, 2020

Project 1 Invention Work, Summary and Response Page


These summary and response guides really allowed me to organize my ideas during my research. If you ever have trouble building your writing flow, this is perfect. 


                                                   Summary and Response: Research

Author(s) name:  JAMES STEYER
Title of article: THE NEW NORMAL: PARENTS, TEENS, SCREENS AND SLEEP IN THE US
Title of webpage: COMMONSENSE.ORG
Website host or publisher or sponsor:
Page numbers (if PDF or in print): 2-35
Date you accessed it (if digital): 2/3/2020
URL (if digital):

Thesis statement (if informed opinion):
UNMANAGED USE OF MOBILE DEVICES CAN NEGATIVELY AFFECT PARENTAL GUIDANCE AND AFFECT THE WELL BEING OF CHILDREN

Important points about it (Write a sentence explaining how you might use it.):
AS A PARENT, YOU WANT THE BEST FOR YOUR CHILD, AND MOBILE DEVICE USAGE CAN COMPROMISE THE AUTHENTICITY OF PARENTAL AUTHORITY.

What kind of research question will this source answer?
HOW MUCH MOBILE DEVICE USAGE CAN AFFECT HEALTH/WELL BEING FAMILIES AND PARENTAL AUTHORITY

Directions: Summarize and paraphrase below.  Use this material on the next page.
In this section, record general notes about what the author is saying. Notice if the author is talking about another author or a different idea that may or may not be his opinion. Note page number if available.
In this section, record quotes to use as direct quotes or paraphrases.  Remember that these details add evidence (logos) to your writing. Note page number, in parentheses, if available.
·         TEENS ARE MORE LIKELY TO KEEP THEIR MOBILE DEVICES WITHIN REACH OF THEIR BED, THAN THEIR PARENTS (AFFECTS SLEEP-PG 7)
·         PARENTS HAVE BECOME MORE AWARE THEY SPEND MORE TIME ON MOBILE DEVICES THAN THEY SHOULD (PG 8)
·         SOME PARENTS BELIEVE THEY ARE ADDICTED TO THEIR MOBILE DEVICES
·         SOME PARENTS FEEL TOO MUCH MOBILE DEVICE USAGE AFFECTS RELATIONSHIPS WITH THEIR CHILDREN (PG 8)
·         OVER HALF OF PARENTS FEEL TOO MUCH MOBILE DEVICE USES ARE A DISTRACTION FROM DAILY ACTIVITIES (AWARENESS) (PG 8)

























Summarize, quote, and paraphrase here.

Read the notes from the previous page.
Choose one point to focus upon and write what the author said here, as a paraphrase, in your own words. Include the page number for the point you are making/paraphrasing:

MORE THAN HALF OF PARENTS HAVE TRIED TO CUT BACK ON MOBILE DEVICE USAGE OCCASIONALLY, WHILE THE LESSER HAVEN’T TRIED OR RARELY TRIED AT ALL (PG 14)

Choose one point to focus upon and write what the author said here, as a direct quote, in your own words. Include the page number for the direct quote you are using:

MOTHERS ARE MORE LIKELY, THAN FATHERS, TO TRY TO CUT BACK ON MOBILE DEVICE USAGE AT 55%, COMPARED TO FATHERS AT 47% (PG 14)

Now, write your own summary of the entire reading. If you paraphrase or offer a direct quote, you must indicate the use with a page number in parentheses.
IN THE PAST 3 YRS, 52% OF PARENTS BELIEVED THEY SPENT TOO MUCH TIME OF MOBILE DEVICE USAGE, WITH MOTHERS LEADING THE CATEGORY. PARENTS OF DAUGHTERS SPEND MORE TIME THAN PARENTS OF BOYS. OVER HALF OF PARENTS BELIEVED. THEIR CHILDREN SPENT TOO MUCH TIME WITH MOBILE DEVICES, HOWEVER, THAT PERCENTAGE HAS DROPPED MEGARLY (PG 14)


Respond here, in a Quote Sandwich.

Consider how you might use this material in your essay. Will this source help provide evidence for one of your main points for your essay? If yes, write that main point in your own words:
TOP BUN
MOBILE DEVICE USAGE SHOULD BE MANAGED TO PREVENT BREAKDOWN IN PARENTAL GUIDANCE AND PROMOTE A HEALTH BALANCE FOR THE WELL BEING OF CHILDREN.

To introduce the author, indicate that they are speaking by using a signal phrase (a.k.a., attributed phrase, tag) followed by the first and last name or last name of the speaker/writer/author. One example is to say “According to Dweck…” The signal phrase “according to” indicates someone else is talking. The author’s name indicates who is speaking.
SIGNAL PHRASE AND LAST NAME
ACCORDING TO GEORGE & ODGERS 2015,

To synthesize the source well, you must clearly include and punctuate the direct quote or paraphrase. Write in one of your answers from the above section, either as a quote or a paraphrase. PROTEIN
“POOR SLEEP HAS BEEN LINKED TO A NUMBER OF MENTAL AND PHYSICAL HEALTH PROBLEMS, AS WELL AS DIMINISHED ACADEMIC AND COGNITIVE PERFORMANCE”

We can’t leave it like this. Now you must indicate the first word of the citation (see page 1) in parentheses:
(SEE PG 4)
Now it must relate back to your argument in some way. Include a sentence that will bridge the author’s idea to your argument. BOTTOM BUN:
CHILDREN ARE MORE INCLINED TO HIDE MOBILE DEVICE USAGE DURING SLEEPING HRS BECAUSE THEY ARE PRIVY PARENTS WOULD DISAPPROVE.


On a separate sheet of paper, record your full and complete response. Use this in your draft.

No comments:

Post a Comment